2nd esssy

This essay was a little diffficult for me. the topics that were given via the book was okay but none really that I could just relate to and elaborate into an essay. After long thoughts, everything finally started coming together. It was a tedious task but I did it. I am not sure how well I did, but at least I did complete everything on time. I like this idea of posting your essay to the blogs and try to look for comments, but each time around it seems as if I oly get maybe one or two comments. I am not understanding why. I would love the feedback, because I know im not a writer and any suggestions or advice to help me progress forward would be excellent. Some people on the other hand I don' think takes this very serouisly or it really does not matter to them what happens or how they essay may sound. I am looking forward to the next essay and see what and how I relate to the topic at hand. maybe this time it won't be so stressful.